tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post1150499248920629858..comments2019-10-22T22:12:36.724+05:30Comments on Scribblings: Premonitionahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16554110451108215362noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-70909322457738924722013-05-15T22:23:05.699+05:302013-05-15T22:23:05.699+05:30Realy amazing it is not a story its a real life fa...Realy amazing it is not a story its a real life fact. <br /><br />In this movement i want to remember one quote "A daughter is the happy memories of the past, the joyful moments of the present, and the hope and promise of the future"<br /><br />aruna rocking again and again. I wish all your success<br />Krishnanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10116500180487703480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-29266777601904275372010-07-12T19:20:23.559+05:302010-07-12T19:20:23.559+05:30The scream that died in her throat rose in his.
k...The scream that died in her throat rose in his.<br /><br />killer line:)<br /><br />way to go..seriously consider writing more stories..Aravind Ravihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13539424591905712476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-80420952035364983712010-06-11T21:28:41.981+05:302010-06-11T21:28:41.981+05:30And the way u have written is also very nice and i...And the way u have written is also very nice and interestingAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09909464981647207390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-8931430729995580542010-06-11T21:27:27.523+05:302010-06-11T21:27:27.523+05:30Hey machi very nice description of daughter and da...Hey machi very nice description of daughter and dad relationship :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09909464981647207390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-24154949522675557572010-05-31T16:44:18.707+05:302010-05-31T16:44:18.707+05:30a very amusing tale of love, misery and greed. if ...a very amusing tale of love, misery and greed. if only we all could find ways to quench this fire of lust. thats how i interpret me. btw i am a manratshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15327176686976121096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-21846333927897417242010-05-19T18:54:23.022+05:302010-05-19T18:54:23.022+05:30This one is most certainly on a different note! I ...This one is most certainly on a different note! I actually got a little confused if the father was talking about his daughter or wife! lol. Beautifully narrated. And it wonderfully culminated with the last para. <br /><br />PS: Though i can really relate to you in the girls position and say, "Welcome to my genre of writing", I guess i dont want to do so because of lack of certainity. :P<br /><br />Great job.Subramaniamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05623566959526728352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-63179295649410508472010-05-12T18:22:24.279+05:302010-05-12T18:22:24.279+05:30And then it happens, she reaches for the door , a ...And then it happens, she reaches for the door , a big drunk real gorilla from african forest has creeped into her house and had flicked a bottle of old monk from a nearby pub. <br /><br />The gorilla jumps onto her, just to notice she resembled his ex-girlfriend whom he lost to another chimpanzee.<br /><br />He stops , he moves towards her slowly and starts speaking, she was amuzed, her white kurti shined like a moon , aah! she thought! , let me hug the gorilla.<br /><br />Voila, the gorilla becomes a prince.<br /><br />Eppadi indha ending :PIntricate Labyrinthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15651618677175588915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-86746090679743327042010-05-11T10:50:31.510+05:302010-05-11T10:50:31.510+05:30Wow Aruna!!
I think this is the first story you ...Wow Aruna!! <br /><br />I think this is the first story you are writing of this genre. The anxiety and malevolence which prevailed throughout the entire story made it gripping. It tugged me to an eerie disposition when I started reading the last paragraph after completing the one before. The insecurity and perturbation were very well expressed.<br /><br />Its been so long since you posted ur last article..I should say it was worth the wait. <br /><br />Keep writing. Cheers..Vikram Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06802374315781726110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-57923524295169155932010-05-11T09:51:59.537+05:302010-05-11T09:51:59.537+05:30hahah.. apdiye un kadhai eh dan!! good 1 boss:)hahah.. apdiye un kadhai eh dan!! good 1 boss:)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13857348533281917997noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-37265622780835613992010-05-10T16:07:09.897+05:302010-05-10T16:07:09.897+05:30kudos chitthi....
i reallly loved it....the introd...kudos chitthi....<br />i reallly loved it....the introduction was jus the indication that it was u........<br />so writer chitthi.......<br />wat was n. mama's response????<br /><br />i really loved it....<br />congratulaton's...........Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05652906894689481040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-38484507197448630852010-05-10T13:40:16.791+05:302010-05-10T13:40:16.791+05:30NICE.. the mark of a good author of fiction lies i...NICE.. the mark of a good author of fiction lies in prompting the reader to visualize the happenings in a vivid manner.... and this write-up for sure scores high on that... <br />another thing that i personally liked about this narrative is its open-ended climax... leaves the reader craving for more.. <br />written in an admirable way... nice pace, neat flow, clear words and good detailing... beautiful..kudos :)<br /><br />the father character reminds me of actor prakashraj's role in the tamil film "Abhiyum Naanum"... <br /><br />a small request... plz write more..! :)P3https://www.blogger.com/profile/10874125045859204772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-87563655084736609232010-05-10T12:55:23.547+05:302010-05-10T12:55:23.547+05:30Knew it was ur story from the very beginning.....l...Knew it was ur story from the very beginning.....loved the way u've crafted the whole thing.....!! Good job...!!! :)Deepthihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16254916381776476319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-79471235744315170062010-05-10T09:50:19.857+05:302010-05-10T09:50:19.857+05:30Neat Presentation..Liked the ending more than anyt...Neat Presentation..Liked the ending more than anything else..Could see that this was indeed an episode of your bangalore stay.aswin jayaramanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16106495304404633690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-46201997919642731092010-05-10T09:17:51.315+05:302010-05-10T09:17:51.315+05:30If S.Shankar makes a documentary based on dis scrp...If S.Shankar makes a documentary based on dis scrpit it will be like...<br />Starring <br /><br />SUPERSTAR <br />ARUNA<br /><br />ALL time best comedian(first time in a serious role) N.MAMA<br /><br />Jus luuuvd d script d last para n d pace of it...<br />maja a gayaSisyphushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15849940260498844158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-81285620252518929632010-05-10T09:12:24.090+05:302010-05-10T09:12:24.090+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Sisyphushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15849940260498844158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-22328591822468100372010-05-09T23:12:53.691+05:302010-05-09T23:12:53.691+05:30well written , suspense lam build pannanum nu alat...well written , suspense lam build pannanum nu alattikaama suspense aarambicha udaneye scripta mudichutu leaving it to the reader... different style attempt for you eh? A good one at that. asked ur dad to read this?:-)மதிhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04418768158787886206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-21041259448064848392010-05-09T23:11:07.371+05:302010-05-09T23:11:07.371+05:30This is my first comment on scribblings i guess......This is my first comment on scribblings i guess...first of all the post was really good...kudos...but pls for ppl like me to understand introduce ur characters so that i am not lost who is who...after reading the first 3 paras i had to read it again to get the whole point cos i didnt think the baby to be literally "baby"...anyway lots of mokkai put....write more often and keep up the good work.slowhandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00776250089771688463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-50181606103219965102010-05-09T20:59:45.383+05:302010-05-09T20:59:45.383+05:30long strides :P .. although i knew from the first...long strides :P .. although i knew from the first line that this is u leaving for b'lore story it had an element of suspense to it which continued til the end.. loved the ending para .. i have one complaint though .. write more frequently ..Praveenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02407009182023544000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5958753898845322149.post-84197955168137408712010-05-09T20:37:04.114+05:302010-05-09T20:37:04.114+05:30I can say this from the bottom of my heart - 100%...I can say this from the bottom of my heart - 100%Un kadhai than ithu.... correct ah? I am Sundeep... It struck me when u had written stating to work in a new place, 22 years of age, only daughter. blah blah blah and not to mention - Jeans and a kurti... :P. Anyhow, it was goodAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09566700564730926115noreply@blogger.com